Mami Tomoe

Best:
You did a fantastic job with a hard pose
The character is instantly recognizable
Your coloring and use of shading is excellent
There's a wonderful amount of effort and detail
Great job on the stripes on her stockings

Good:
Her hair swirls look just like those of the canon character
The clothing ruffles are very well done
The costume is very accurate
Consistent color scheme

Needs improvement:
Some of the brown collides with the yellow
The shoe needs to have more of a shape to it
The fingers don't bend properly
There should not be a curl to the left side of her bangs
Her cheeks need to be wider
She looks older than in canon